Here’s the deal, pick six sentences from your WIP. Link back here. That’s it! Here’s my space governess story again!
“Miss Talbot?” his voice sounded harsh to his own ears.
She appeared from around the corner, a plate steaming in her hands.
“Yes?” she set the food down in front of the boy and handed him some utensils. She smiled up at him and his heart leapt up into his throat.
“She treating you right, boy?” he switched his focus to his son and Marlene drifted away. The distance helped.